This is really nice, it doesn't feel like it's nearly as long as it is! I really like how you go back and forth so much between the same things, it feels like that has a lot of narrative meaning (though since I haven't watched the canon I don't know what that meaning might be). And that first footstep is so good.
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Date: 2022-06-21 11:11 pm (UTC)