okay, so I really loved both of these. First off, I thought the editing was beautiful in the first one and I was really swept up. For the first one, I found myself almost wanting a few more words to be text, maybe a bit more first person to draw me in? But then in the second one, the simplicity of "swimming" and "shore" as representing the characters and their journeys really really worked, which I thought was an interesting shift!
It looks like such a beautiful source too!!